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To live is to search.
To search is to find.
To find is to love.
To love is to hurt.
To hurt is to forgive,
Or to let the best thing slip through ur hands.

A wilted heart, full of blood.
destroyed by a former love.
when its petals begin to fall,
who will be there to catch them all?

As time passes slowly by,
I watch my life and I cry.
I see her standing there.
Eyes hidden by her hair.
All i know is that Im sorry.
Now I wonder, as i worry.
does she love me,
or doesn't she?

silent prayers in the night,
trying to help me decides whats right.
as i cry,
i hear her sigh,
and feel a shiver of fright.
Some random poems i used to help a friend in a relationship problem.

NOTICE MADE ON 3/10/11:

I'm currently working on some short stories to try and get published and i'm debating on whether or not i should add these to the list of stories i plan to send in.

Let me know if you think i should.
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TheTwerpyWolf Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2017  Hobbyist Photographer
I sung all of that. because Why not
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rised-demon27 Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
beautiful
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AS-Caena Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013
its so wonderfull !!!! very very good poem !!!
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Lynnae-Madison Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is a great poem ^^
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Pocketrocketgem Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
good poem :squee:
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alygatorleigh Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Student General Artist
most definitely...........good luck getting them published and good poem
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ArtistNinja101 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
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DarkxHeartsxKelly Featured By Owner May 22, 2012
Umm, im new to this website and can someone plz help me out by tellin me how to add my poems to the poem category, plz and thank you.. (: Just msg me how to do it. thanks a lot! ;D
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lildreamer6281 Featured By Owner May 20, 2012
hi dark-puppy,
i know i am late with my opinion, lol.
but i hope you did add this one. my heart has been on both sides of these words. do we as people ever get it right? if you have gotten your short stories published plz send me the name of book, would love to read them. i started a group on face book " thoughts and feelings", i would like to share this there. i always ask first. plz let me know. ++Fav
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BleedingBlackRose7 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is amazing!
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Bloody-Writing Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012
I really love this. I especially like this verse:

"A wilted heart, full of blood.
destroyed by a former love.
when its petals begin to fall,
who will be there to catch them all?"

I think it conveys emotion perfectly
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loveamysteriousthing Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011
I just fell in love with your comparison of a heart to a flower. Unique yet original idea. Awesome!
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thecr8tive1 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Student General Artist
I love the flow of the words...ahh its soo beautifully written. great job! its so sad though, aww hope ur friend is alright!
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TheFragileBlueRose Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2011
great job! lovving these poems
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sasha-mangalover Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2011
:cry:*sob* i had just finished watching Wolf's Rain when I read this, and now I'm listening to Shadowland off The Lion King! SOB. Why! :crying: very good. but you should watch Wolf's Rain, it's allso a manga, the manga's better but Youtube's free. plz, 4 me.
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Miishiiru Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2011
Love it! Good conveying of your thoughts !
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StrawberryBlast46 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2011  Student Writer
Random? I don't think so
I this the best!
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FireWolf23 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Your amazing work was featured in my journal: [link]
This was incredibly well written, and I really liked it.
Great job! :clap:
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MoonlightOrchids Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
That is neat... Very deep. You said that you wrote this to help a friend? Just wondering, but have you ever tried just sitting down and writing stuff without a purpose, and then seeing what you get?
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BabyBear19 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2011
i rlly like tht its a graet poem
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Zydellion Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011
I really like these poems. Thanks for putting them up.
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marnie-blue Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2011
i realy love it
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KiaArmstrong Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2010
This is kind of a sad poem, but its full of emotions and i like that. It describes a love life that in most cases is true. I really like this poem. I think it gives me a since of sadness, but curiosity on how to fix the problem. :) you did a awesome job. Keep up the good work.
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Isoya-star Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2010  Student Photographer
Wow, this an amazing peice of poetry. It's very realistic as you've put some emotion behind it. If you know what I mean.
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dragonblade619 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2010
nice kinda deep........awesome
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Hukam Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2010
Very nice,
I like that I can relate.
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altered-leirbag Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is good. i like it :D
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Deranged-Bliss Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2010
Omg I <3 it
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alykat1119 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2010
pretty cool :)
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dewdropsoothing Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2010
just awesome, im not poet like u but can just say just awesome
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artmaster544 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
it's really nice!
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Dark-Puppy Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2010
thank you
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spazow Featured By Owner May 26, 2010
nicely written,did you take random pomes and put them together?
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Dark-Puppy Featured By Owner May 28, 2010
no. i made them, none of them have titles, so i put them together as random poems
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spazow Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2010
Considering you are no poet, this is pretty dang awsome,you would be a great writter,i must say,your poem is the most touching poem i have read so far, and liked, considering you are no poet. it's totally dope, considering you are no poet.
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Dark-Puppy Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2010
truthfully, i'd like to write stories, but i cant finish them. after a few chapters, i get writers block and cant do anything. look at my other stories, and youll see this be true
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spazow Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010
Omg, please, don’t you lye to me, I just read your ‘The Gardener’, it looked finished to me.
Wow, that was interesting. What I like most is that it carries on after the killing of the wife….
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Dark-Puppy Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010
i can write short stories. but i want to make a chapter story. problem is, writers block three chapters in. now i got 2 kids and no time to work... T_T
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spazow Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2011
haha,why don't you write a book, make it on you and your kids, but like, change the names, and add more things to it, if you really think about it, they can make you big, it's just an idea.

how old are they,your kids
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Dark-Puppy Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011
my son is 2, my daughter is 1. they keep me busy.
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Endured Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010
You should give you're self more credit!
I liked very much
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Endured Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010
You should give you're self more credit!
I liked very much
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DiNoR4Wr Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2010
Love it It was wonderfu...in that sad ind of way... :X
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kally108 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2009
Excellent. May I use this for a blog I am maintaing. I need to get out of my deprression !!!!
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Dark-Puppy Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2009
give me credit for it, and sure.
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kally108 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2009
Thanks a lot. Certainly will do that !
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JezaarahUbisian33 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2009
Definately goin' on my favs!
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edlivlilkre Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2009
aww this is good and sweet i love it!<3
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raducu94 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2009  Student Writer
I will defiantly add as a fave. I like it very very much
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